This topic naturally inspired stories and poems of dreams of
different writer’s views of the ideal world, of dreams that came true and
others that did not.
We looked for a utopian world free of pain and strife, a
litter free country, springtime without rain, a life uncontrolled by
electronics and a mind hovering between dreams and nightmares.
Off the main theme of dreams were two very diverse pieces; the
culinary masterpiece of baked beans and an introduction to volunteer tutoring. The
latter was not easy to pitch in terms of format, length and content for the
‘average’ potential volunteer.
The group had previously decided to improve the amount of
suggestions, critique and discussion provided for each of the writings.
This worked well. It obviously took more time but most
appeared to think it was worthwhile. Like everything else it needs practice.
We did not all agree on our comments about any particular
piece, but that’s life; we are all different and often have diverse opinions.
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