Thursday 10 October 2019

8th October 2019. Adjudication Project.


Two weeks previously, members had submitted two copies of a maximum 2000 word piece using a pseudonym. These were randomly circulated for other members to take them home, read them and make an adjudication. (Possibly using the guidelines recently set out in the Erskine Writers BlogSpot under the heading “Writer’s Notes”)

Six items were read out by the authors together with written critique or comments from the other members.

John S. read a chapter from his work-in-progress book. A girl woke in a dark room. Already disoriented, her worry turned to panic as an increasing number of screens in the room lit up. They showed ever more garishly painted and hideous faces of circus clowns. Not on for suffers of coulrophobia.

Wilma wrote of a young woman trying to involve both her recently bereaved mother and her more able mother-in-law, in the life of her new baby. There was a misunderstanding over who was scheduled to do the child minding during an evening out by the young parents. The situation was eventually amicable retrieved.

Pete explored the upsetting of male and female stereotypes.  The husband was as dedicated to his perfect doll’s house while his wife was enjoying DIY hobbies.

Elizabeth’s story was set in early twentieth century Scotland. A young gaelic speaking boy was leaving what remained of his impoverished family on the island of Islay. He is to have the culture shock of being brought up by his affluent aunt and uncle in Glasgow.

Morag wrote a review of the book “Wake” by Anna Hope. She gave us an introduction to multiple interrelated characters whose lives were still being severely affected several years after the end of the First World War.

Fahmy examined the existence of black holes in the universe and the aid given to their discovery by the Jodrell Banks and Hubble giant telescopes.

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Next week’s theme :- A Dear John letter   -  500 Words.   

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