Friday 29 November 2019

Adjudication and Readings from Woman’s Short Story Competition. 26 November 2016.


The competition had been kindly adjudicated by three members of the Caithness Writers in Wick, who had made a unanimous judgement and provided valuable comments on all of the entries.

The results were
  First          Kate Gordon              The Beekeeper’s Wife
  Second     Morag Moffat             Three Red Roses
  Third        Elizabeth Gillespie      A Typical Teenager


Kate.  The Beekeeper’s Wife.
    The main character is in a quandary over whether to leave her cottage and garden in the country, or move to a much more convenient flat in town.

    At the walking club she meets a larger than life, but down to earth wife of a beekeeper who regales her with anecdotes of how bees live their lives.

     After hearing of the disastrous effect on bees if they are forced out of a comfortable and familiar hive, she makes up her mind to stay put.

Morag.  Three Red Roses.
     The accidental discovery of three discarded red roses, provokes an elderly lady to recount the story of roses presented to her by her first love. He was shortly afterwards ‘lost’ in the war.

     Years later after the death of her husband, the first beau reappears with more red roses, but is rebuffed.

     The couple eventually come together tragically at the end of their lives.

Elizabeth.    Missing
    At a winter holiday in a remote cottage, a recalcitrant step daughter goes walkabout.

    Her step mother fears for her safety as she remembers a similar tragic incident when she was a child.

    Neighbours start a search and the lost girl is eventually found by a dog. The girl’s relief starts to dissolve the barriers between her and her step-mother.

John S        Tough Love.
    A female director in a family company enjoys the respect of her fellow directors and a comfortable family life with loving husband and ten year old son.

    A chance encounter with at a business meeting with a male executive from another company develops into a meeting for lunch, a friendship and more.

    It reaches a stage where she has to make big choices for her future. Will it help to put all the pros and cons into a spreadsheet?

Hilary         No Man is an Island.

When Allison’s near neighbour breaks a hip, Allison needs to enter her flat and search for clothes and other personal items and take into hospital.

She is amazed how different the two of them are in terms of style and outlook. Allison considers herself dowdy and reclusive compared to her outgoing neighbour.

The accident quickly exposes her to several other friendly neighbours. Until the accident, their paths had never crossed. Now one of them invites her for a meal.


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