Thursday 12 December 2019

Adjudication and readings of Children’s Short Story and Poetry Competitions. (Plus Mince Pies) - 10 Dec 2019


Children’s Short Stories    Judged by Bishopton Primary School. 

First place Kate Gordon
Poetic   Harry is so hairy he has no friends until one day a bird decided to make a nest in his hair.  The bird is so pleased that Harry has provided a perfect nesting spot and protect her fledglings that she decides make it an annual occurrence.

Second place     John Hughes    
Patrick the Penguin got some new glasses an read books about being a pilot, but poor eyesight and no hand was a challenge. Towards the end of a 500 metre penguin swimming race a whale threatened, but Patrick’s new magic goggles enabled him pilot the plane on a fish finger bombing raid to ward off the marauding whale


Third place        Sandra McGruther
The scatterbrained wizard had lost his wand, glasses and spell book. The reflection of his wand in the local pond led to a soaking, but also enabled him to find his glasses on his forehead. Now he could find his spell book and magic up a well earned pie for his dinner. Unfortunately, his eating utensils were now missing.

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Poetry Competition – Betty Munnoch Award.   
     Theme - A Renfrewshire Ramble   Judged by Brian Whittingham

First place Hilary Stevenson  
A choice of dour Scots words described a uncomfortable walk in a harsh and drab terrain. The weary walker was glad when it was all over.

Second place Morag Moffat

Third place   Kate  Gordon
A sun soaked ramble many years ago when a piper played, children skipped and the previous poor weather was cast away like a set of old clothes.

Highly Commended    Kate Gordon.
A myopic rambler observes vegetation and wildlife which send the thoughts elsewhere.  A miss-observed cyclist mending a puncture turns out to be a drooping flower.

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Almost all edible seasonable goodies other than mince pies were used to wash down Wilma’s ever more challenging annual Christmas Quiz.

Jack was thrilled to correctly guess the answer to his Christmas cracker joke.
Q.    “Why can you tell that a ghost is telling lies?”
A.    “Because you can see right through him.”

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Next meeting;_  Jan 7  Open Manuscripts -  Priority for previews of SAW entries.

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